Hell's where she went
no time to repent
my jeezabel miss
welcome
to the demons abyss
So lust is your craft
I'll give you a draft
of just what to expect
as our passions connect
flames without end will
consume all your sins
as we take off into the
madness of psychotic bliss
From limb to limb
on every delicious and
scrumptous whim
the demons of darkness
will give you delight
No time for sleep
prepare for us creeps
to slither and crawl inside
your soul
Fire and ice, steamy and nice
we'll ignite every wire
with tormenting desire
jilting your sexy body
with eletric jolts
and flame throwing notes
of sensual ecstasy
Bone of my bone and
flesh of my flesh on
this Holloween Eve
we'll show you some
tricks and treats that
you'll never forget
in this house of pain
where the prince of
darkness reigns
A contest entry
- Halloween contest for men only (adult) by JinSays.
1500 points, ended November 4, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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we'll show you some
tricks and treats that
you'll never forget
in this house of pain
where the prince of
darkness reigns
I agree with Elliot, HOT DAMN Darell Baby, this is FABULOUS! really! you stayed just this side of what I really like. Not too blatant. No smut
WOW my sweet, you did an awesome write for my contest, and I thank you. I send you much love, always, and wish you the best of luck,
jin
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Hot Damn!! your words are wicked! great job
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Wickedly good! Great flow and rhyme, and definately naughty! l.o.l. I think you have too much fun with this stuff dude! l.o.l.
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Wow!! How seducctively dark and delectable!!! Hats off to ya!!!
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