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Reflection Of Self

Philosopher.

Innovative.

Bold.

Honest.

Poet.

Intelligent, in an artistic way.

Modest.

Respectable.

Innocent.

Wise.

Witty.

Smart ass.

Real.

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Inspired by a video response I saw on youtube about describing yourself with one word or phrase. Obviously in this poem, I used a few more words. I might add to it if I think of anything else. But, for now, it is what it is.

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  • this i feel is you in a nutshell well done sis keep doing well
    love your bro rev papa


    • HaleyMary
      April 4

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      Thanks, William. I tried wracking my brain to think of traits that I thought would describe me the best. Glad you thought it seemed accurate. Some people don't think I'm that much of a smart ass, but I beg to differ sometimes.

      Thanks for commenting.

      Haley Mary


  • penman gold member
    November 23, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Such a great creation. Thank you for sharing.


  • Desire gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Wow~

    You know this reminds me of a brainstorming activity I used to do and boy was it FUN
    I imagine more words should be added- Heck-
    You have so many darn qualities-
    Heck my tongue~ is tied
    Very Creative
    Thank You for sharing Yourself and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~

    • HaleyMary
      November 21, 2008
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      Thanks, Desire. This was actually lots of fun to do. It's very rare that I do a poem about self reflection. I tend to focus on things outside rather than within me most of the time. But, it's great to have a variety of styles in life, right?

      Thanks for reading.

      Haley Mary


  • Jalalbad gold member
    October 12, 2008
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    cute

    • HaleyMary
      October 12, 2008
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      Honestly not what I was going for, but thanks. :)

      Thanks. I didn't really plan on writing this as cute, but I guess it could be interpreted that way. Thanks for commenting.


  • Amera gold member
    October 11, 2008

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    You forgot, beautiful, sexy and most important; my AP sister who I love dearly.

    Love,
    Amera♥

    • HaleyMary
      October 11, 2008
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      Thanks, Sister Amera :)

      Sexy?

      I've never seen myself that way. It reminds me of what my high school friends would say that friends will see their other friends that way, but you never see yourself that way. But, thank you. That's a great compliment, Sis. As long as it's more of a compliment on my mind. I like to be appreciated for my mind and personality more than anything else.




  • ckwriter69
    October 6, 2008

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    hmmm I like it. Your not a smartass though, don't be hard on yourself, haha. I could add a few, though like beautiful, hugable, reliable, dependable, just for starters. Keep writing Haley.

    • HaleyMary
      October 6, 2008
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      Ha, ha. Thanks, Charley. you know what, I think you're right. I think maybe I'm just a strong woman who just isn't afraid to speak her mind and maybe I intimidate some people because of that. I think you're right on with the reliable and dependable. When I worked late nights at Burger King a couple years ago my co workers always gave me credit for being reliable and not ever missing a shift. I guess I can be too modest sometimes, eh?

      Thanks for always being supportive of my work. I appreciate it.


  • Dalaney gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    i can agree to every word you wrote (except for smart ass because i have never seen that side of you...lol) i like the concept very much! love, lane

    • HaleyMary
      October 5, 2008
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      Aw, thanks, Lane. Hey, believe me, I can be a smart ass sometimes. It's just that I don't show that side of me all the time. But, my parents always complain about that side of me. I think I annoy some of my subscribers by being a smart ass sometimes, too.

      Glad you liked the poem. Thanks for the comment.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    October 4, 2008
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    Just the kind of person i would choose to have as a friend.

    • HaleyMary
      October 4, 2008
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      Aw thanks, Buddy. I feel the smart ass part is something people may have a hard time dealing with sometimes, but it's good if people can look past that. Always appreciate your comments.


  • Olivias Violin
    October 4, 2008
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    Good stuff!


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    October 4, 2008
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    That is a great description of you.

    • HaleyMary
      October 4, 2008
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      Thanks so much. You know what's funny? I know I've been at allpoetry way too long when people comment telling me this says so much about me and I am thinking, they're right.

      Thanks for your comment.

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