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Unmasked

Neon lights flash
And all I see around me
Are the shadows of the others
The lost

We don't know who we really are
Lost in this perpetual dance
Forgetting the connection
We all share

I step out of beat from the rest
And suddenly everything has changed
I can see passed the colorful masks
To the pain

The tears streaming down their faces
The longing burning in their eyes
The acceptance they can never see
Me

The lights are still flashing
And they're all still dancing
I just can't do it anymore
No

Until we let our guard down and know
That we hurt much deeper than the surface
We'll be lost in a physical dance
Never more

I don't see bodies dancing anymore
I see us as we truly are
As different colors of that wonderful light
The rainbow

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  • i reaaaaaaaaaaaaally like this!!

    yaaaaay i love the last stanza especially, as i would, but all of it together as well...because it's all so true! this is a really beautiful poem


  • birch
    October 27, 2008
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    your final stanza was quite, quite beautiful. excellent.