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Now you see me...Now you don't

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I'm just a lonely chameleon,
don't mean to sneak around.
But if you're looking for me,
I'm no where to be found.

All over the place you search,
far and near...here and there.
Never knowing how close I am,
right in your pretty blonde hair!

If you let me stay here with you,
no trouble you'll have from me.
I'm quite as a little mouse,
camouflaged...no one will see!

Author notes

Love all your beautiful animals my favorites are Boots,Mache,Coral and of course Buddy and Mallory!

I have four RL sisters and would love to have one more!

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  • Ms-Mouse
    January 7
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    Adoptasister.com

    Want my brother?


    • darlintlc silver member
      January 9
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      Thanks and sure I'll be glad to take your brother! LOL!!


  • Raining Kisses silver member
    October 11, 2008

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    my mum told me to read this after my little sister asked me what a chamelion was this is a brilliant picture sounds a little like a childrens book its fantastic and to grip a child as full of life as my little sister it must be good nice work

    ps im littlefishesones daughter

    • darlintlc silver member
      October 12, 2008
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      This is truly an honor to get a comment like yours! I hope your little sister now knows what a chamelion is! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem littlefishesones daughter!

      darlintlc

  • Raining Kisses silver member
    October 11, 2008
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    This is a lovely piece of writing, the rhyme is really easy, it just jumps from your toungue, there is something a little sing somgy about it, my four year old daughter really liked it too, it is a very nice childrens poem. I think the imagry is just right, I can see the chamelion in my minds eye tiptoing around and sneaking up on people lovely poem, thanks for sharing littlefishone (Theresa)

    • darlintlc silver member
      October 11, 2008
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      Thanks for your sweet comment...glad your little girl liked it! It warms my heart to know that I might bring a smile or two to someones face!


  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 10, 2008
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    You are now my wonderful sister. Welcome to my family

    • darlintlc silver member
      October 11, 2008
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      Thanks so much for the welcome! Can't wait to get to know you better Sis! Take care and thanks also for the honorable it was a honor!


  • lianonsidhe silver member
    October 6, 2008

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    Aw! So shy! A wonderful chameleon, just right for the zoo! Super fun write!


    • darlintlc silver member
      October 7, 2008
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      Thanks much for the read and the comment! I think he would fit in just right!


  • Meej
    October 5, 2008

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    he he that's so cute and i could really visualise a chameleon in someones blonde hair peeping out and about! good luck in the contest.


    • darlintlc silver member
      October 7, 2008
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      Thanks for commenting Meej! Isn't he a cute little chameleon?

      Thanks for the luck
      darlintlc

  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 4, 2008

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    Oh, I love this! Such an adorable little piece! I love chameleons, though they're a challenge to care for. Thanks for entering my contest. It's an honor :-)

    • darlintlc silver member
      October 4, 2008
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      Thanks for your kind words! I was afraid I wouldn't get it in on time! Whew!! Didn't know they were so hard to care for...but I'd love to have one just the same! To me they look kinda lonely but...sneaky! Ha!

      Thanks for reading
      darlintlc

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