The Death of Spring

Yellow, red, golden
leaves mark the death of Springtime!
A beautiful death!

A contest entry

Anniversary Haiku Quickie by carole21. 700 points, ended October 6, 2008, 9 entries
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H...is for Haiku by DogFish. 600 points, ended December 13, 2008, 22 entries
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carole21
October 6, 2008
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nice colors . . thanks for the contest entry
Harrisham Minhas
October 5, 2008
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Well-expressed.
A sad and happy depiction at the same time.
KayJay
October 4, 2008
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A unique voice and interpretation... nicely done. Best of luck...
Ken
whispernthedark
October 4, 2008
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It is such a beautiful death. Great haiku, best of luck in the contest.

♥
whisper
copper29
October 4, 2008

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I wish you didn't use two exclamation points in a row. It takes away from the beauty of your words. Other than that, nice job! Good luck in the contest.