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You went some where you said you'd never go,
Or maybe you just grew older.
You wore something you said you'd never wear,
Or maybe you just grew bolder.
You did something you said you'd never do,
Or maybe you just grew colder.

Are your blank words for better or worse,
And your solid face full of thrust.
My heart is about to burst,
With worry,
For you and sometimes for me too.

But I think you over heard,
That frozen tears cant fall to break,
A hollow heart.
And I will always love you,
No matter what you've done.

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  • Nettlles
    October 6, 2008
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    Thanks, that mean a lot
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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 6, 2008
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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    I like the drawing of Sally from Nightmare before Christmas - I also really enjoyed your poem as I can relate to what you have written with some of my friends chaning over time and moving away ... very well penned

    Best of luck in the contest

    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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