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I Can't.

I think of you, always.
It sounds so cliche to say
that I’ll love you, forever.
That I am dead without you
I still have your picture, framed.
I can't seem to put it away.
God my heart is broken, another cliche.
I sleep only in hopes of dreams of you,
when I realized I stay awake, waiting.
Expecting you still to come, to me.
Smells trigger memories, settled,
and I let them linger on, dwelling.
Then fantasize you’re not gone, evermore.
God my heart is broken in two.
I can’t live for tomorrow, or today.
I live in yesterday’s memories, of you.
How do I mend my broken heart?
I can’t.
I chose to live remembering you and me.
I can’t, I won't let go, of us.

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It's been over two years and I can't, still.

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  • rainyday woman silver member
    October 15, 2008

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    Thank you so much for entering this contest, I was hoping it would prove a catharsis for some and aide for others. Again thanks for entering.

    Cheryl


  • penman gold member
    October 6, 2008
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    Wonderful

    A terrific creation for the theme. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


    • januaryrain gold member
      October 6, 2008
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      Thank you very much, I really appreciate your commenting on my poem and such a lovely comment too.


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 4, 2008

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    DEEPLY HEARTFELT!!!!!!!

    As one loves another only to have them go away their love remains on, strong and everlasting.


    • januaryrain gold member
      October 4, 2008
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      Thank you, I really appreciate you reading and commenting on my poems.

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