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Absolution

don't get too close
they say it's contagious
       + contagious +
dangling from the
fishhook of existence

diametrically shaped

       while --
psychos abound with
every twist and turn
surrounding me
suffocating me
as i look for ways
to keep the present
from fading away
dodging and swerving
the wave of life

living by keeping it all inside
don't need medication
i'm stronger than that

but inside my head
lightning flashes
wrecking havoc
as copper tongues
          s l i t   
the |capsule| of time

written words
       d.i.g.g.i.n.g deep
a glimpse to the insightful one
deciphering metaphor to reality

the absolute opposite
the absolute tantamount

absolutely entangled
in the sweat of her voice
in the silky touch of her flesh
in the cyanic enamel of her eyes

       she --
my absolute contagion
my absolute damnation
my absolute intimation

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 5, 2008

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    Thank You For Entering

    Well I must certainly say that this is a very well penned clever witted poem. I mean it has such depth beauty and really good flow through it. I do like how you put this poem together and well enjoyed the read. good work and good luck