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In Dependancy

herd.

that person without people isnt that person any longer
you need ten sticks to make that single one stronger.

rope.

make my two worlds intervene,go ahead demonstrate.
eyes open wide and a mind tied tight.does it frustrate?

mannequin.

you are what everyone wants you to be.are you alright?
do you still have an opinion, a vision or just the sight?

candle.

firey droplets of anger fill those eyes up,incessantly they fall
you have to speak up for yourself,live by it,shoulders back,stand tall.

victim.

will you let the disease get the better of you?will you crumble under?
you have no one to really lose and nothing to keep but this blunder.

mirror.

are you still you without the help or are you now hypnotized?
is it me with all those faults orjust really you that you criticized?

firecracker.

will you fall underneath your own debris till your soul burns to ash
or will you let that ego hurt just to save you from this crash?

star.

I'm here,I'm standing looking for something new,some mystery
all i keep crashing into is this past and all that's been history.

sunshine.

I'm shiny,I'm bright,and yes new i am indeed
i'm waiting to be sown only yet still a seed.

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  • Dygurl
    October 5, 2008
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    great write, unique and makes you think. good luck in your contest.