sneaking past my thoughts,
my mind racing,
as you take my hand,
you've said the one thing barely anyone says in truth,
that wonderfull "I love you"
Then i awake realizing you are gone from all my dreams..
not knowing if i can say those three words back to you,
my heart tortured and fooled,
i fall to the ground crying,
please ease my soul,
take away this painful love,
it ended with good bye as you walked away from me.
A contest entry
- Ultimate Love Poem Contest by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Short n sweet.
Precise and exactly to the point.
Penned nicely.
Heartbreak sucks espcially while dreaming.
Waking up feleing alone always sucks.
Very well penned poem and I enjoyed the read.
good work and good luck
Hope ya find real love someday
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