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Hell's Vixen

The beauty of a goddess
The heart of a demon
She takes men on a
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And all it costs them is their souls

Gets them subdued with wild ambitions
and mounts for a helluva ride
Leaves their heads spinning,
and gasping for another breath
as she ravishes them with her delights

Her victims are like gasoline
and she is the sparked matchbox
that sets Hell's passion aflame

They always fall fast asleep
in her deadly dark chambers
and wake up begging for mercy

Silence she yells, in a raspy voice
you are mine now, to do as I please
My father, Satan says, I can have you
for my sexual bidding and evil fun
All he wanted was your tired soul

So, men, if you should ever see her
I tell you, for your own sake, run
because if you happen to fall prey
to this SINsual, devilish trap
you'll be eternally bound to the watchtower...





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I am 37 (Adult)...it's me Jeremy
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  • JinSays gold member
    October 17, 2008

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    WONDERFUL!
    I DID love it, do I know this girlie?
    LOL
    You've outdone yourself, my sweet. You have firmly planted a smile {} to my face. . .gotta love that!
    Best wishes, and Happiest of Scrumptious Halloween treats for you, Jer.
    Much love always,
    jin


  • TheDeadMan
    October 17, 2008
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    nice.