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Reservation within My heart

If only I was where you are
I wouldn’t have shed all this tears.
If only I knew where you were
I wouldn’t worry all this years.

Every night all I think of is you
Every day I wonder if your sky is blue
I wish I knew,
I wish, I had tiny a clue.

I long for you
I miss you
I just wish you knew
I wish I could tell you.

It doesn’t matter if we are apart
For as I await for your return
for you I hold Reservation within
My heart

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  • Shuberth
    October 15, 2008
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    Awesome!

    Abner, this poem is so sweet and I can well relate to this…
    I feel and think the same like you… it flows so well and the rhymes were beautifully sequenced… you showed your feelings …
    I loved it



    Great Write!

    I enjoyed reading!

    Shuberth