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colorless walls

hazel eyes
smiled in
recognition

movement slow
but sure

to me  

larger than life

but today
small voice
fragile body

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Prompt: Moments In Time

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    another somewhat abstract piece but it conveys a sense that we should enjoy the precious moments as they occur and hold them dear forevermore - as memory fades the spirit can draw strength from our finest hours.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 4, 2008

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    A beautiful muse's thoughts...

    I felt the poignancy within your heart-felt words in this tender poem. I'm wishing all the very best to you in all you do. Take care, and keep smiling. Peace Always, Cyn


  • Cannonsfire
    October 4, 2008

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    Smiles*...I know you were worried but since seeing him today I know you're heart is a little lighter and brighter. C


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    October 4, 2008

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    This is excellent sis!! You never do cease to impress me!! This is truly wonderfully written and amazing!! You did a very very fabulous job!! Hugs!! I love you!!