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sanity

as crystalline dreams
weave into and out
of our sorrows,

we stood tall
and sank back down
so low,
it was strange
how it all began

a slight shiver in  the rain,
the silver lining
on our cloud
as each tiny droplet
f

a 

  l

    l
s

sending us spiralling
out of control;
into our sanity

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    awww this is lovely, im guessing you are writting for a walk in the rain?
    hmm, well i really like this. thanks for entering and good luck
    Stephanie ♥