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Our Love Sun

I sit here waiting
for our love long lost
to wash ashore once more.
Our love like the sun
it has set beyond ocean blue
to rest with you,
and every night I wait
to see the sun once more
bearing your heart to me.

Our hearts have traded

and minds remember

the warmth in touch

from each other.

I caught your heart at first sight

as you caught mine at first kiss.

The sun has dropped your love

for me into shining rays

that warm my skin

and melt my heart.

Come back to me my love

and let our hearts be whole

once more.

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 5, 2008

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    Thank You For Entering

    I enjoyed reading your poem here. I am slightly coincerned with the font coloring of your wording and the background clashing with each other but I did not say in the rules it had to be legible font so no biggie but least one cna read it. any ways with that being said your poem is quite fine and quite nice to read. anyw ays over all this is a nice piece and I wish you wlel on the path of love. good work and good luck