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Silhouetted Youth

Silhouetted youth turn away,
From the grey world,
That holds a bleak tomorrow

A contest entry

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  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    November 13, 2008

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    This poem is somber and bleak, are there no prospects of hope? You have effectively set a tone and mood. I hope tomorrows horizon is more promising.

    You have been Hoodwinked by the Poetic bandits today because WE CARE!

    Dennis


  • poetryality silver member
    October 8, 2008

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    This is sad! I don't know what our future holds for the next generation but I will remain hopeful. You said a lot with just 13 words poet. This is one that calls the reader to contemplate. The best to you in the contest. I love your background!


    Much Love ♥

    Renee