So you want to mend a broken heart
you’ve come to me, that’s a very good start
First let me take a few little notes
a contributing factor, can be us blokes
But having said that, it can work both ways
I think that’s where the problem lays
An operation will not be needed
as pain in time will be receded
I’m sending a prescription in the post
couple month’s treatment I can boast
Now the dosage and how to take
once a day make no mistake
Get yourself out and join a club
you never know whose shoulders you’ll rub
Think of the person who caused this pain
do you think their locked away going insane
Laugh at any little single things
and watch the people start to join in
“I know it will take some courage from you”
but do yourself a favour, “see it through”
Why not call this your new adventure
very soon you’ll see, it’s a real life quencher
Don’t come to me in two months and say
I’m loving, and living my new life’s play x
DR.KEVIN (NIVEK)
Doctors notes:
No further appointment needed
for in two months, “she will have succeeded”
A contest entry
- How can you mend a broken heart by rainyday woman.
875 points, ended October 15, 2008, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like that you took the "Doctors" position on mending a broken heart. I like the simplicity of the piece, altho it is not simple. Thank you for entering my contest.
Cheryl
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HIYA
Thank you for your comments and the HM,i do hope things will improve,as with most things in life good or bad they pass and it's not untill you look back you see the changes,howerer miniscule it does help you build,
TAKE CARE
KEVIN X
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