What’s wrong with me,
Sitting here thinking about you,
You broke my heart in two,
And will never be put back together,
You hurt me, and you do not even know it,
You think you did nothing wrong,
But I know I am damaged for life,
you played with my heart,
and spat it right out.
Darkness reaching out and drawing me in.
I feel nothing but the empty ache of loneliness,
I cannot and will not rise to your control.
Your voice cuts through my paralyzed soul.
I wish you were dead,
Out of my life forever,
I feel hurt, I feel numb,
I can hardly shut my eyes,
Because all I see is you,
What you did to me,
I will never forget
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Great job!!!
It must feel wonderful to be able to write about it and heal from it. It isn't wonderful that we all have to go through these awful things. I have found healing through writing. Your vivid use of emotions puts the reader right in the middle of your pain. -
Great poem
I understand the feeling that you portray in this poem. Just keep on laughing, don't get bogged down. I think you did a wonderful job. -
i love it its a great poem mad respect keep it up keep going i ma going to check the rest of your stuff out and comment ok peeace out stay true stay sic peace
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