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The World

The clouds
The sun
The sky above
The lake
The stream
The life

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  • Sokarjo
    December 15, 2008

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    Hmm... good imagery and interesting style. But I'm afraid I fail to see how it fits the contest. Thanks for entering anyway! :-)


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    The poem flows in imagery but is somewhat unfinished. You need tell How do these relate to a lost love

    return the favor?


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    Nice Haiku

    I wanted some thing with more Subtenants , it was well done thank you for entering the contest
    please read over my DQ's


    Blessings

    Rend


  • Rhythm Child
    November 14, 2008

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    this just didnt have enough content for me sorri
    i hope youl re enter


    message me for anything
    Billy (Rhythm Child)


  • hellizacomin
    October 29, 2008
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    This simply took my breath away. Everything that makes life brilliant.
    ~Ashley~


  • poetryality silver member
    October 8, 2008

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    Wow! The sinmplicty here is phenomenal! Great take on the picture prompt poet. I wish you well in the challenge.


    Love & Respect ♥

    Renee

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