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Far side of fifty

 

 

 

there was an ole minx from uk
much older than she dare ever say
oh she looks very nifty
for the far side of fifty
and still hoping to get a good lay

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  • individuality gold member
    September 27

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    a good poem which transforms poetry into something brand new, i think this lady was pickin' at little birdseed smiles, wings wildy flappin' for she's a tiny chicken who wishes for some sighs.


  • usefuldistraction
    November 24, 2008
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    Delightful and wicked! Exactly the way these should be. I enjoy Pithy!


  • george the 23rd
    November 21, 2008

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    Ah, this gave me a good smile. It reminds me of this old fella, Arthur from the UK I used to work with. He was full of wonderful poems like this, risque, without ever being dirty...


  • Pearl-1
    November 14, 2008
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    hahahahaha
    this is really funny
    i laughed me crust of bread of
    loved it
    June


  • Cannonsfire
    November 1, 2008
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    LMAO Oh I am glad I clicked on this LOL..what a great chuckle for the evening. Thanks c


  • HeartTangles
    October 30, 2008

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    LOL...sounds like a limerick, very entertaining. Such a nifty written poem.


  • parenchma
    October 23, 2008
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    I think I met her at the truck stop.
    You sure are up late. Doin any good?


  • Balldinger silver member
    October 22, 2008

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    as if woven into the immaculation of her own tendency. laughing in the back isle. coined to perfection...


  • TransparentOpacity
    October 22, 2008
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    humorous .... very well penned ..!!

  • Uriah Hamilton
    October 19, 2008
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    And I'm sure she derserves it!!! Also certain it will be fun for both parties!!


  • Patpowers silver member
    October 12, 2008
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    VERY FUNNY! Nicely done and so original! THANKS!!!


  • Tony El Great silver member
    October 4, 2008

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    Great work, thoroughly enjoyed the bawdy humor, keep it up (keep him up) if you know what I mean. ¦:¬{


  • Floorboards
    October 4, 2008
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    Hahaha, that's the Jan we know and love! nice limerick my friend!
    snugglehuggles, Alex.

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