I've opened up my heart
one and too many times,
And found myself writing
these depressing rhymes.
I pick up my journal
and pick up my pen,
And in time I know
my heart will mend.
From forever and always
to never again,
This is just the beginning
only I write the end.
A broken heart is like a bruise
it goes away,
At first it hurts and leaves a mark
but it heels one day.
I've delt with every tear
and listened to every song,
I've felt myself grow
a little more strong.
I thank everyone who's brought me down
from the first to last kiss,
Because without you
my beautiful poems wouldn't exist.
A contest entry
- How can you mend a broken heart by rainyday woman.
875 points, ended October 15, 2008, 27 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this is fucking awesome- see, perfect people dont make good poets.... last stanza says it all..
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Into every pice of art there goes a bit of pain, especially with poetry. This is a very good piece, thank you for entering my contest.
Cheryl
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nice.....
a great write......a good explanation on how to mend a broken heart......good job....good luck!!!
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Great Write
Nice, i mean not the whole meaning of the poem its acutally very sad but the whole write in it self is very good and I think your displayed your emotions very well in this Cassie. You need to post more. I like reading them.
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