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The power



And he runs through my veins
in rhythmic measures of my world
breaking into subtle waves of leaves and flowers
that pass a scent of belonging ~
in the ocean-cradle of my very being
where all of life unfolds
through my cathedral within ~

and he is me...

Author notes

"There is only One,
and there is nothing outside Him.
He is. He is and He is not;
and neither is He, nor is He not.
He is with form - all forms are His form,
all names are His name -
He is without form,
and He is beyond form and no-form."

- Sri Mâ Anandamayî -

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  • maa gold member
    October 6, 2008

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    a truly graceful response to the prompt ...
    leaving a delightful perfume of unity and bliss upon my heart ...
    thank you,
    maa


  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 4, 2008

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    How very beautiful. Flowed very nicely! A nice spiritul piece to start my day. Good luck in the contest!

  • carole21
    October 4, 2008

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    a lovely take on the prompt as always . . liked "in rhythmic measures of my world" and "and he is me" . . good luck in the contest . .


  • Sandal
    October 4, 2008

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    I like this very much, how a devotee perceives divinity, very personally in the experiences of life. This is very good poetic expression. Good luck!


  • notorious
    October 4, 2008

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    I love that this begins with 'and'--like a thought incomplete that continued before that we can't read.

    "ocean-cradle"
    Adore this hyphenated phrase...it's unique, full of imagery, and it just works with this serene piece.



    Jessica

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