Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Torment

Emotional pain,
minimal gain.
From suicide,
I must refrain.

Lovely tears,
many fears.
That’s what I’ve felt
throughout the years.

My spirit’s bare
and nobody cares.
Life’s a torment,
life’s not fair.

Do you touch yourself at night?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Brian Balzer
    October 4, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Does that have a double meaning?

    It very well could. This briefly describes a lot of torment. I've never been suicidal but I can relate to the rest of the poem. You're right lifes not fair. If it was we wouldn't have to console ourselves at night. We'd have someone to do it for us. Best of luck.