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...but never forgotten.

glass excuses fall
crashing against your steel face,
to evaporate
and reform later, when I'd
visit your grave one last time

sending carrier
pigeons with messages to
your porcelain house,
red with shame and unpainted
siding, chipped and weathered with time...

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  • catalyst.
    October 4, 2008
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    Wow. I loved this. The imagery and metaphors were amazing.
    Great write.