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Scar

I have a scar
That cannot be seen
It’s not on my skin
It’s inside of me

Though it cannot be seen
You know it’s there
Just look at my expression
Saying “life isn’t fair”

Who gave it to me?
I will never tell
But the day I got it
My life went to hell

Invisible to the eye
But clear to the soul
The scars deep inside me
And I hide it down below

From that day
I was always alone
Didn’t want any friends
Was silent going home

I isolate myself
Just to take away the pain
Feeling the cold tears
Fall from my eyes like rain

I have no more fears
And I don’t even cry
Why I got this scar?
I will never know why

I guess no one knows
What happened in the end
I just hope the scar on my heart
Will some day mend
'Kay'

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  • MD Masroor
    November 19, 2008

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    Wow. Strong deep and meaningful and somehow connects to people on a universal basis. beautifully penned. no wonder you got the silver! keep it up!


  • FreeTara
    November 5, 2008

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    I Hope the scar on your heart will someday mend too, its the worth kind of pain becuase you can't stitch it up.
    Take care kay


  • rainyday woman silver member
    October 15, 2008

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    A very good piece, Thank you for entering it in my contest, I enjoyed reading your piece very much.

    Cheryl


  • U.s.m.c
    October 14, 2008
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    this is really good i can relate....actually i think alot of ppl could relate.

  • rayabrown916
    October 14, 2008
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    I like it, I can relat


  • ReAdInG.iS.sExY
    October 12, 2008
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    wow this is really good. i can really feel your emotion. i like the way its done... a great write...good luck!!!

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