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Sweet Innocence

Sparkling lips and fingertips
from tasting sugared treats,
you are enticing and so inviting.
Please come and share your sweets.



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  • ZachP silver member
    October 12, 2008
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    "please come and share your sweets"
    well, can't this be taken a multitude of ways.
    Well done!


  • lianonsidhe silver member
    October 6, 2008

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    OOh! Delightful! I'm a real sweet tooth so this one is honey to me. Super write!