i loved once upon a time,
far far away
a leap year ago from
yesterday
she was like no
other girl
making my soul leave
this world
she could kiss my
cloud nine
it was sunshine on my face,
it felt so fine
but when she would cry,
all i could do is cry
i couldn't dry her eyes or
clear her sky
i couldn't return what she gave
so easily to me her love so true
i now know i didn't do right
by you
what i asked wasn't
fair
the love wasn't shared
my dear
it's tomorrow,too late to say
i loved you yesterday
too late to cry for the love i loved
once upon a time,far far away
A contest entry
- Ultimate Love Poem Contest by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I'm gunna give you points for your poems! by SmartBrick.
400 points, ended November 30, 2008, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This is so sad.I am sorry for your loss but hopefully you wrote this just for the contests and it is not something you are going through right now.Glad I did get to read this though you showed alot of sincerity and heart.Good luck to you.
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Very NICE!This was sad and kinda sweet too!Niceeeeee
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Thank You For Entering
Well I have to say this was quite a rhyme filled poem and yet it flowed absolutely beautifully. I really love that alot. any ways as for the overall poem I liked your choic eof words and how you pieced it together and broke it down just beautifully. its amazing how such a catchy title can turn into quite a remarkable poem. any ways good work and good luck
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