compass points
to summer banquets -
RVs follow geese
Sunset nests
in exposed branches -
frost feathers the pond
Author notes
Prompt: write 1 to 3 haiku WITH NOTHING TO DO WITH DEAD LEAVES.
In a list
A contest entry
- HAIKU by Swan song.
550 points, ended October 5, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful - thoughts outside the box! Love the final line - I know just what that frost looks like.
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Very nice. Great imagery. I enjoyed these a lot!
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These are beautiful, left me with such a beautiful thought, well done with these haiku. Best to you
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must be a sight?
We don't have RV's here in SA. More caravans but that is not one of the most popular things to see either.
Loved what you've done with the prompt!
Keep well
Becks
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compass points
to summer banquets -
RVs follow geese
excellent
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