When we see our life though child eyes it seems so grand
The world is full of new adventures we have not explored
Deep down we take our home town friends for granted
We did not see deep down the wonder of our life
As the grand world tarnish in our sight
Comfortable home memories dwell in our heart
The real truth is when we go home
So much has changed it seems like we missed so much
For every choice we make leads us down a path
Some shall return others will not
The real truth home is where your heart is
Our heart can be many places
Memories of love shared are so very precious
A contest entry
- Going Home by azure85.
600 points, ended October 12, 2008, 22 entries
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Comments
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excellent~
Excellent poem
The last stanza is a clencher
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Susan~~~
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The real truth home is where your heart is
Our heart can be many places
Such a wise saying, your poem is full of hope and home. I enjoyed it very much, thank you so much.
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Beautiful and thoughtful words on the subject of home and its' importance in our lives. We do take much for granted, but we realize later how precious home really was. Thanks for sharing these well thought out sentiments.
Dennis
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