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Hold On for Me

hold on for me
no one else,
not yourself

hold on for me
forget the rest
hold on for me,
the very best

hold on for me
alone at night
and one day
i myself
will hold you tight

hold on for me
do not fear
hold on for me
i am here.


hold on for me,
my love is strong,
i'm sure it will help
with the carying on,
but i am so selfish,
to ask such a deed,
for you to hold on,
only for me.

but these arent my words,
they are the maker of kind
they show that you care,
but i also find
that you do not share.

so as long as you hold on for me
till i'm ready to tell,
i'll hold on for you
and we will both live through hell.

Author notes

srry bout the cap[itlization and all, i'll get to that later, right now i'm pissed and wanna rite a poem, but i cant, so im posting this one.

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  • Damaged Sun
    October 7, 2008

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    O:
    I'm in lurve too, and I know it's hell to wait.
    Will our dreams come true?
    Can we really hold out?
    I think you explored those briefly and cleverly in this piece.
    Great job. Thanks.