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Prismic Beer Goggles

My eyes are dim
I cannot see
My glasses like prisms
my heart throws askew this
mine vision;
Blond and broody
in twilight's rainbow hues
The time is nigh
the moon shall rise
the light behind you
hand in hand we too shall walk
trusting no man
walking in
blind faith

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Vicolours http://suicidollxp.deviantart.com/art/vicolors-99120333
love, hate, faith ... all has great potential to distort our vision, our perception, much like the power of suggestion has on an open and suseptable mind.

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  • Never Fall in Love
    October 23, 2008
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    You could expand on this.


    • ErisLeFae
      October 24, 2008
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      my pen (so to speak) had run dry so I hadn't visited ap for a little while. Sorry I did get back in time to find what u meant by asking me to expand on this (before the contest ended). perhaps our inks shall cross another day?


  • Age of Rain
    October 21, 2008
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    You took this to a place I had not expected. Very good though. I rather liked the finn.