I thought I never see one again.
it came near me
but it was flying high.
It saw me and flew back to a tree.
this reality came true to my own eye,
usually it is so fast
it is hard to see.
this memory will always last.
A contest entry
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This is cute. I like how it shows that something simple, like a hummingbird, can really have an effect on you. Thanks for entering.
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Awh this was cute; I've never seen one either but certaily wouldn't object! Nice job!
and best of luck in the contest 
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Excellent
Explains the feeling well of the encounter with a special treat of nature. Great poem. Don
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I thought I'd,a wonderful entry to this vivid write, this is beautiful in so many was. Such a natural and calming read too, love the imagery of the humingbird.
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I've never seen a real hummingbird; always have wanted to
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