pumpkin orange mittens
red wool cardigan
morning
hands around steaming mugs
rosy cheek smile
departures
bundled up bus stops
breath clouds whispering
hurry!
A contest entry
- HAIKU by Swan song.
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love it

bundled up bus stops aah cozy

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bundled up bus stops
breath clouds whispering
hurry!
I can relate to this haiku I was one of those poor kids waiting for the bus in the cold



