True love never ever fades away
When flowers bloom or skies turn grey
During the pains and sorrows of life
With all the anguish and all the strife
Love will stand firm along the way
True love will never ever fade away
Deep in the depths of the heart's warm eyes
Are the beauties of heaven in which love lies
Wonders so great and bright as the sun
Love will still burn when the day is done
Love stays strong and never grows old
As shiny as the stars, and as soft as gold
But love brings heartache, and sorrow to the eyes
And if the love is true, it never ever dies
A contest entry
- Ultimate Love Poem Contest by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - once again - 4 OPTIONS (PW ALLOWED) by Rhythm Child.
400 points, ended January 24, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A beautiful and emotional write. very touching. I enjoyed reading it very much.
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I honestly think that this is an amazing poem.
I love it. I really do.
The wording and just the words you chose were perfect for the style and flow..
It's VERY spectacular; Keep it up.
~Beth
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i love this
this poem is beautiful keep up the good work..
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Thank You For Entering
Oh this is such a true well penned poem. it is very true that true love never dies and it just lingers with you and your heart when you feel hurt and lose your love. I have bene batlting this and still am battling from losing my first true love and well nevermind. any ways this is a vert different take on my contest BUT it is certainly well penned and I like it. you stuck with the love theme but described how heartache feels and what it does. anyways good write and good luck
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