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Conditioned Response

Conditioned Response.
Fight or flight.
I am not one to fight.
so I went with flight.
I flew from your arms,
your love, safety and comfort,
but where will I fly to?
Oh how I wish that I could
fly right back to you.

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prompt; CONDITIONED RESPONSE
30-50 words

A contest entry

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    October 16, 2008
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    God, I love this as much as 'Truth!'

    Great write... You obviously have a way with words!


  • Grey Mouser
    October 6, 2008
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    Very nicely written, thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser