…let my arms be your pillow
to rest your troubled mind.
I’ll hold you close and softly,
while peaceful dreams you find.
…let my soul share loving thoughts
to ease your lonely heart.
No need for shouted sentiments nor
fulsome words impart.
…let my lips sing songs to you
rich with love and hope.
Songs of the past carrying
our future in poetry and trope.
…let my eyes entreat you
to share your love with me,
to open your heart and show me plainly
all there is to see.
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…let my love enfold you
within its golden fronds
so gently that you feel no need
to strain against the bonds.
In a list
A contest entry
- Ultimate Love Poem Contest by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful
Very well done. So very creative. Best of luck in the contest.
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the rhythm sings
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Wow! Not only was that deep, but touching too. I like how you portrayed yourself as a bond worth keeping. Impressive, yet serene. Keep it up!
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i love the style askinga questioning...Wont you..Then explaining what you like. Good lulck in the contest
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Thank You For Entering
This is such a remarkable well penned poem and I like the take on this poem. its very interesting how you sliced this poem together with ythe words you used and furthermore its an attractive poem because its very well penned. anyways a unique quality entry that makes me smile
good work and good luck
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