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Aging

~*~

time
dims the memory
breaks
from the past
begins
ends

left are remnants
layers peeled away

inside....
a timeless
spirit

~*~

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    powerful emotive content here shows the contemplation and deep yearnings of the heart, well done.