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My Love (Aubrey)

        My Love

Aubrey Aubrey day and night
You, my girl, wear a halo bright

Everyday my love for you grows more
Whatever the crisis I shall hold still for

Future thoughts have you in mind
Our hearts beat as one.. intertwined

Distance keeps us temporarily apart
You are my one, my only, my heart

We've been thru hardships in the past
Working together, will be surpassed

I hope this poem will let you see
How much my love, you mean to me!

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 4, 2008

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    Thank You For Entering

    I have always personally felt that any and all poetry comes from our heart and wlel we define our feelings through expressing it in a poetic way and this is exactly what you have done. I really love the beauty of the poem you have penned here and also really love the over all depth and flow through out it too. any ways its amazing how such a simple sweetly penned poem cna do wonders for the one we love. any ways good work and good luck