With your hand in mine we can
Take on any mountain
Climb any hill
Maybe there we will have a picnic
For my heart, you will fill
We can dance on the moon
Like there is no tomorrow
Or just run away
leaving behind all sorrows
Reunited feels so good
With you next to me
We can take on the struggles of the world
Or just live and be free
A contest entry
- Ultimate Love Poem Contest by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
This was all from scratch. I wrote this in 5 minutes, yet put a lot of thought into this. This poem is very personal
Comments
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Thank You For Entering
This is a very well penned extremely impressive write too. I really love the over all depth beauty and methaphorical useage built through out this piece. any ways what impresses me most is how you are willing tog et away from it all and just go for it. basically throwing caution into the wind and taking off as long as you are with him. any ways just a brilliant creative poem. good work and good luck
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