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A Sweet Tune " Te' Amo"

 

In dark eyes we fall into  a trance
and my body has a mind of its own.
Within an instant a connections shown
as your smile invites a special romance.

English is history when I speak to you
and a new tongue unravels a sweet tune.
Te' Amo escapes from a sweet tender bloom,
intriguing the inside, heating me through.

I love you too is easily penned
yet with a spark you can make sweet words flow.
Sweet touching with the warm words, "Te' Amo"
will send a passion all will comprehend.

Te' Amo mi' Amor, you've stole my breath,
then give a gift, that only words can bare.

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A contest entry for:
Ultimate Love Poem Contest
Come One Come All and Enter my Love Poetry Contest. I am in need for some sappy romantic or love type poetry so come on in and enter.

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  • countrybabe gold member
    October 17, 2008
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    Congrats on the Gold


  • Griswold silver member
    October 4, 2008

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    Fine job baby, I loved it when you read it to me, and I love it laid out as well. Best of luck sweetie, I love you...Scott


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 4, 2008
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    Thank You For Entering

    This is a mighty fine slic eof poetry and I really admire the depth and flow through out this poem. what really captured my eye was how you used the spanish words of love in this poem for the title of the poem and also in the poem itself. quite marvelous as I dwell upon it. any ways over all a very well penned beautiful poem and enjoyed the write. good work and good luck


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    October 3, 2008

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    This is so hott sis I absolutely love it!! You are such a wonderful amazing writer!! This is so sensual and sexy!! I love how you write!! This is very thrilling!! I love it!! I love you sis!! Hugs and kisses!!!


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      October 3, 2008
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      I am glad you liked this lol. NOW THATS A PRECIOUS COMMENT
      I love you My Princess.


  • The Drifter
    October 3, 2008

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    I love it--so sweet--mild and tender--so needed at quiet times like a mellow sunset with an evening breeze.
    Te' Amo para todo tiempo, mi amor. Mi amor Tory. solamente no otro.
    I can hear you saying these words.


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      October 3, 2008
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      LMAO hey my Spanish aint that good
      Thanks so much for your kind words. You know
      mi amor, things in life happen for a reason,
      stay strong and know, it will only get better.

      Love
      Passions


  • cricketjeff gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    Beautiful love poem, and what I believe is called a Canadian or alternate English sonnet.

    So tender and loving superb.

    • PassionsPromise gold member
      October 3, 2008
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      those words coming from you mean so much to me.
      Thanks so much
      Love you

      Tory

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