It was crumbling by note fulls
my love song, tears tethered
while time passed, like monsoon rains
she despised my every being
Years sorrow without her sang anguish
to dismay she called, long hours
time all spoken, how we both felt,
over the same rusty tarnish through life
with years not shared in bliss
we maybe in our sixties
never to late for rose showered love
she mailed me endless I love you's
I sent her heart candy and daunting lingerie
hours we chuckled and then it came to pass
we married in purest of white like love's song
notes dancing in wedding cake's delicate icing.
A contest entry
- Ultimate Love Poem Contest by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very nice
Having bad thoughts only hurts the one with them. Relationships find impasses and they should be worked out, because we all make mistakes. Sometimes it takes a while for us to see that. Very nice write and thought. The Shaker
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Thank You For Entering
I really love the way you wote this poem and how you really worded this too. its quite an over all impressive write and its great to read. any ways I love the title of your poem and really love how soft n sweet flowing the poem turned out to be. good work and good luck
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