Holding Hands
As I put my hands into yours,
a perfect fit,
yours smooth, gentle and strong,
mine smoother, small and loving.
As you tenderly touch mine,
and gently squeeze them,
I feel silent euphoria,
I can't help but smile..
Holding hands with you,
I want to go beyond that,
hold you in my arms,
close to my chest,
whisper in your ear,
and listen to you whisper in mine.
Holding hands with you..
I wish you would make that first move
with me for a change!
for now..
I just want us to hold hands again,
sit alone,
and say absolutely nothing,
but smile and blush at each other.
by: Nada Adel Sobhi
A contest entry
- PIF Contest/Word Prompt by Allyce May.
800 points, ended October 22, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is so sweet, its like the first date... I know how this feels lol, I like it a lot u explain what she wants and its what most girls want from a guy that they like I like it a lot. Thanks 4 sharin it with me
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aww.
This was a cute and amazing poetry!
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A truly amazing poem for sure! I loved it! I've felt this way a million times before as many girls have. It has really nice flow! I hope to hear more from you soon!
lady -
That is so cute. i have totally felt that way b4.
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wow
thats a really nice poem. i like it! great job -
amazing
This is truely amazing piece nada this line --->yours smooth, gentle and strong, it describes my hands perfectly and this just makes me smile even with its touch of silliness i love it.
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quite funny yet sweet and its just so tender =D
GGRRRRRREAT JOB~!!!^^
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