Even though it seems you're gone
You're still here in a way
You're in the sky up above
I miss you everyday
When you left the angels cried
And made a storm go by
As the tears rolled down our face
We couldn't do much, but cry
But you're in the Earth
And in the breeze
In the water
And in the trees
I can't wait to see you again
And talk about the good 'ole times
And I miss you so much again and again
Which is why i wrote these great rhymes
A contest entry
- Im memory of...R.I.P by Christina-is-crazy.
300 points, ended October 18, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Whoozer you are such a great person, you deserve better
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Hmmm.
not the greatest poem.
And not the longest, but it is a pretty heartfelt poem.
I can understand how you feel. -
Words from the heart. Grief is the deepest, hardest emotion for one to have to ever experience. I wish you a gentle healing and good luck in the contest.
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