Your siting on your bed,
tears streaming down your cheeks,
the phone rings...
you answer,
talking in little gasping breaths.
The voice on the other line is smooth,
melodious,
calming.
And as your talking to him,
your wondering,
thinking to yourself,
how you could have gotten so upset
oversomething so small.
In the end you realise,
one of the reasons your still in one peice,
is because of him.
Because you love him>
A contest entry
- Ultimate Love Poem Contest by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended October 17, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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AWWWWWWWW!
This was sweet!I loved how you described how you got upset over something so small,yet you felt better because the one you loved was on the other side.
♥B/P
Don't mind the devil,it's my face. -
good luck in the contest, even though you did misspell piece, but whoever disqualifies you fo that is pretty mean
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Thank You For Enter
ya mispelled Peice at the end should be piece any ways I will not say if it has impacted my decision or not but I will say your poem her ewas beautiful and very well penned. I really like the simplicity to this poem and how it flows so smothly and evenly. over all this is a wonderful peom good work and good luck -
Nicely Done
This is a very nicely written piece. I liked it very much. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Countrybabe
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