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...Birth

I felt you move,
life took on meaning.
Inside you were growing,
excitement grew each day,
I saw your face…

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Prompt: Moments In Time

20 words (no more no less)

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    awww, what a precious snapshot in time to be able to hold onto, the creation of life is the ultimate gift of love.


  • Lola Lola
    October 4, 2008
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    this one is sweet! reminds me of juniper.


  • Stingersinger53 gold member
    October 3, 2008
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    This is beautiful and I'm sure a moment you will never forget! Good luck in the contest!
    Cayla