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Iced in Retrogue

A captured fragment of light
  small piece of imagination

Torn
    from the Renaissance
    gleaming blindingly

Frozen in grey shrouded
                      rememberance.

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 5, 2008

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    very dynamic take on the prompt, beautifully expressed. just one minor typo "rememberance" is spelt "remembrance" but don't worry that one has caught me out a time or two.