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Halloween Rhyme Time

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See Peter Peter pumpkin eater,
trick or treats tasting sweeter.
Three mice as blind as can be,
without masks, still can't see.

Little Boy Blue played his horn,
hoping to get sweet candy corn.
Mother goose gave out golden eggs,
Miss Muffet, chocolate spider legs.

Mother Hubbard had non to share,
cobwebs found in cupboards bare.
Bo Peep dressed up her flock,
little wolves run up the block.

Big bad wolf in sheeps disquise,
sharp sweet tooth and shifty eyes.
Two black cats were Jack and Jill,
tumbling down cemetary hill.

Humpty Dumpty gone, not a trace,
in corn maze with egg on his face.
Three Kittens got Mounds and Mars,
still hoping for Kit Kat bars.

Simple Simon, a difficult night,
no pies found this night of fright.
Witch, goblin, green face and hands,
roam streets of Mother Goose land.


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  • faded dreams
    October 6, 2008

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    This is very well done. I enjoyed the way you mixed in so many well known nursery rhymes. I had fun reading this. Good luck in my contest.


  • faderman1959
    October 4, 2008

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    This has got to be one of my favorite of yours! It was so much fun to read and the story was great! Wonderful!


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 4, 2008

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    This is such a great piece and such fun to read! It put a big smile on my face.
    I love all those Nursery Rhymes you included and the rhyme scheme is wonderful. Flawless as always
    All the best with this!
    Gaylene


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 4, 2008

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    I love this, brought forth a much needed smile

    Wonderfully written Sweet Sandy
    Best of Luck

    Stay safe
    Love to you
    ~Manda


  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    Children would enjoy this one to pieces!! So much fun and filled with lovable characters! A true gem! Good luck in the contest!


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 3, 2008

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    THIS IS ADORABLE!!!!!

    This just flows off the lips as one reads!'s Sounds like a fun halloween night!


  • BehindTheShadow
    October 3, 2008
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    Excellent rhyme and rhythm, a very original and creative write! Great job.

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