Dreamers colliding midst fog,
brokenhearted, blinded
awakened by child like wonder,
love building castles again
into the sky, happily forever!
A contest entry
- Twenty 20 #2 by Errant Panther.
460 points, ended October 5, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Your thoughts about this muse....
Comments
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well done. A terrific expression. Best of luck in the contest
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lovely take on the prompt, depicting the splendour of love that should envelop us all.
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Ah..this is really a strong piece inspiring one as well..the immages are very beautifully penned and the impact is also braining the message into the forefront..well done...
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Nice sentiment, becoming like a child again!
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