The moments like these
where you take my breath away
make me want to save
them together and
die breathless
Author notes
Prompt: Moments In Time
A contest entry
- Twenty 20 #2 by Errant Panther.
460 points, ended October 5, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a beautiful and soft sigh evoking piece, so many precious moments, so little time to reflect.
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eeeeeeew. This is awesome!! Fantastic. Beautiful! So much said with so few words. I love it. Good luck to you in the contest!
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Beautiful take on the prompt. Good luck in the contest!!
Hugs!
Cayla
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Wow, this is amazing, it left me breathless. Excellent take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
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