Running through the park
Rain follows us
But we don't care about anything
Except catching each other...
It's been so long since we've acted like this
Little kids, without a care,
It's fun to eat cotton candy,
and roll around in the mud...
The rain slows to a mist,
Clouds and Fog blow in
But the moon shines through
Illuminating our love
And in the morning when we awake
Still covered in cotton candy,
Made more sticky by the rain,
You quite simply say:
"this cotton candy covered day,
brought us everything but clean"
Author notes
My prompt for this poem was-"this cotton candy covered day
left us all but clean" which was a quote written by: written-in-ink
[[I didn't know if we were required to use the quote in the poem, so I did... I hope u don't mind that I changed two words, but it fit my poem better that way.]]
A contest entry
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700 points, ended October 9, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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no i didnt mind
but you didnt have to
hahah
its funy where you took this
because it wasnt how i ment that qoute to be
but i love you take on it
it was amazing!
hahah
thank you so much and good luck.
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